Target

This should go to, there is not enough Tactics fan-fics on fan-fiction in general.

I have the first chappy done.

Have at it.

Just an FYI: people tend to like one longer chapter rather then three shorter chapters.

First Chapter posted, which is about 7500 words. I think it'll suffice. It's a cute chapter :3

People do like long chapters.... when the author doesn't update all that often. But when you update regularly, they don't mind the shortness.

Yay Tactics.

Hey guys, big thing about the FF.net account for next time.

First chapter, say who played who specifically. Not just "These were the people involved."

Like...

Roy: Koru
Riza: Sailorstar165
and so on. Just say the Your Role account. No need fo a fanfic account listing.

And Gold? I think you need a little more practice formatting. Try taking aook at "The New 14th Noah" for examples of what to do. I know it's successful simply because of all the reveiws, and because I can reread it a long time after and still understand what's going on and not be confused by order.

If you look at Target, the formatting is better then unshown, I might re-fix unshown.

Final chapter is posted.