Gold's Art

Instruction: Please follow these instructions to help me improve in art, and look at my art. All of my art will be divided into three columns, No Critique, Minor Critique, Heavy Critique. Rate all works 1-10. 1 as in poor quality and 10 as in great quality. Critique Specific details is when I post what I would like to be critiqued, and only that aspect should be critiqued. Under each art I will have a self-critique, along with ratings from other users. Each column will have different sets of rules for comments/critique:

No Critique:

-Just Rate this work

Minor Critique:

-Rate Work
-Critique Specific Detail Stated

Heavy Critique:

-Rate Work
-Critique Every Aspect

Thanks for reading instruction, continue with Rating Art.

(Artwork to be posted)

Title: School Girl Chibis
I would like critique of the shading of this picture, and the use of colors.

Self Rating: 8
Self Critique: I think the colors and shading came out overall well, the touch of black seems to make the shading look better....the vest on the blonde girl could have been shaded better....and the ear should have been shaded.

Member Responses:

Title: School Girl

Self Rating: 6
Critique: The actual uniform itself came out very well, and the shading was done pretty nicely. Her eyes are a little big, although it does signifiy innocence. The shoes could have been better planned out and more detailed, although they were shaded propertly.....the hands definitly need work, as well as the arms, but they didn't come out too terrible. The pose is nicely drawn, adding more to her personality.

Member Responses:

Sailorstar165: The eyes on the second one are big, but I think it kinda fits the characters. The shoes could be bigger, but I think the real trouble is that the shoes and the socks don't stand out against each other. Perhaps ink a line where one ends and the other begins?

Otherwise, it's really good. I like the outfit and the shading's pretty good. 7/10

Title: Eliwood

Self Rating: 8
Critique: The outfit came out exactly how I planned, making the boots and the clothing clash well together. The sword could have had more detail, but there isn't a lot of detail on Eliwood's swort to begin with. The hair is decent, although a few of the hairs turned out wrong.

Title: Cloud And Zack Chibis
Self Rating: 9


Critique: The colors and style came out great for me.

This picture isn't really an drawing, but I posted it up because I wanted to point out how short I am XD

Added "Eliwood" into the "Heavy Critique" Section.

Added "Cloud and Zack Chibis" into the "Heavy Critique" Section.